Author: `shinee
Story Title: Letting Go ; One-Shot.
Story URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/SHINeeO1/
Reviewer: th1rd3ye

Site: http://shreddedhearts.blogspot.com



Title: 3/5

This title is rather overused. However, it does fit your story.



Poster/Background: 5/5

Love it!


Forewords: 9.5/10

You know what?! I absolutely love your foreword! I just feel that maybe you could just add in some little background information on the two characters. Other than that, wonderful job done! I love the quotes as well as the part about Fate. It makes your readers ponder and become more interested in your story which will reveal your views on Fate.


Plot: 9/15

The plot is common and quite cliché but the way you wrote it made it beautiful.


Originality: 14/20

Same comment as “Plot”, since the plot you used would reveal your creativity and originality.


Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation/Vocabulary: 15/15

I think your command of English Language is really strong. You are meticulous too! WONDERFUL!



Detail: 5/5

You put in a lot of efforts. You added in colours, actions, weather and dialogues. Well done!


Writing Style: 10/10

What can I say? Well done!


Overall Enjoyment: 8.5/10

I think you typed the name wrongly. Ki Bum or Kim Bum?! Oh. I LOVE FT ISLAND TOO, CHOI JUNG HOON ESPECIALLY! =D



Bonus: 5/5

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Total: 84/100

Labels: th1rd3ye