Author: 'Niii
Story Title: Because I Know
Story URL: http://winglin.net/fanfic/_know/
Reviewer: Darkess @ shreddedhearts.blogspot.com

*My reviews are not meant to harm or discourage the author, but to help them fix their stories and do better in the future. The opinions expressed in this review are mine and mine alone, and are not meant to offend you*

Title: 4/5

It fit the story, but I didn't think that it would have stood out very much on the winglin page.

Poster/Background: 5/5

Beautiful :D the designer is a genius :P

Forewords: 10/10

:O. This forewords really makes the reader want to know what's happened to Taemin. And of course since everybody loves Taemin, this is a fantastic way to grab attention. It was also good that you told the genre of the story as well as the type and characters that are included.

Plot: 15/15

It's hard to develop a good, strong plot within a one shot, but somehow you pulled it off. I loved taking a trip back into the A.mi.go days, and I loved how their relationship developed. adored how Key was the first person he called to, and I cried when they had both died. Amazing.

Originality: 12/20

Sadly, I've seen so many 'falling for the non obsessive fan' plots that I'm sick of them. The same with her 'leaving' and 'dying'. But I thought the him calling to her when he collapsed on stage, and even him dying was a twist that was definitely needed to make it your own.

Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation/Vocabulary: 15/15

100% perfect as always . Great job Eunnie ^.^

Detail: 2/5

It was hard to picture this story because there was almost no detail within it. The only thing for sure that readers could imagine was the blue envelope that Jaemin's letters came in. I would have liked more detail on settings, characters, and items to imagine the story as you must have better.

Writing Style: 10/10

Absolute love. You have perfect grammar usage so the story flows smoothly, and your writing is easy to follow and understand.

Overall Enjoyment: 10/10

You made me tear up. again.

Bonus: 5/5


Total: 88/100

Labels: Darkess