Author: th1rd3ye
Story Title: ♥ Flair & Fleur & Key ♥
Story URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/sss_key_FFK/
Reviewer: dramafreak4eva @ shreddedhearts.blogspot.com


Title: 4/5

The title suited the story well and that it was eye catching, although, the title should’ve been written like a normal title ‘Flair & Fleur & Key’; other than that, you chose the right title.


Poster/Background: 5/5

The poster was very nice designed and the background didn’t have any problems. Overall, I loved the poster.


Forewords: 10/10

The forewords were very well written and made me want to read on really badly. Although, how the characters were described was a bit cliché and irritating because characters shouldn’t be described that way. I also loved the preview that you gave because that part really gave out an effect that this story was going to be interesting to read. Well done!


Plot: 15/15

I’m really impressed! You are one great writer and the plot was absolutely fabulous. Everything was laid out so perfectly, I couldn’t stop reading! One great story!


Originality: 19/20

The plot was original and I’ll also add this even though it’s not in the rubric but very creative also!


Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation/Vocabulary: 14/15

You used a wide range of vocabulary which made the story unique and much more interesting to read. Not many mistakes or errors found.


Detail: 5/5

Your characterization and details were very clear and I understood everything, they were also well written and I didn’t see any problems with it.


Writing Style: 9/10

Your writing style was understandable, clear, simple and didn’t contain any long paragraphs. Everything, such as what was going on was very clear to me and I simply really liked your writing style.


Overall Enjoyment: 9/10

I really enjoyed reading this.


Bonus: 4/5

Good job on how everything was set out.


Total: 94/100

Wow, you got a high score from me! Good luck with your future stories because I love them and I hope you do write more ‘Key’ stories.

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