Author:JooRin
Story Title: You Were My Friend...
Story URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/joorina1/

Reviewer: AustinHush @ shreddedhearts.blogspot.com

Title: 3/5
Poster/Background: 5/5
Forewards:9 /10
Plot:8 /15
Originality: 2/20
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation/Vocabulary:15 /15
Detail:2 /5
Writing Style: 6/10
Overall Enjoyment:1 /10
Bonus:0 /5
Total: 51/100

Let me start out and say that you do have the potential to be a writers it’s just I don’t think you know how to express it. I did like the characters but they were a little childish and not very creative. You could have done a lot more detail. I would have liked that. As for the originality it wasn’t that good as well. It’s been used over and over again countless times. But you did really well in your spelling, etc. So don’t feel that bad. Everyone has to start out somewhere. And last but not least I didn’t enjoy the story. I found myself struggling to read all of it

Labels: AustinHush