Author: th1rd3ye

Story Title: Figment

Story URL: www.winglin.net/fanfic/sss_tm_Figment/

Reviewer: ★----Cass♥JongKey@ Shreddedhearts.blogspot.com



Title: 5/5

I really LOVED your title , when i saw it i was ready for a sad and interesting story that was going to blossom

Poster/Background: 3.5/5

posters were REALLY great ! ;3

but then the background was really jus abit too plain maybe you could repeat the pictures?

Forewards: 8/10

good introduction to get people attracted to , but you need to be alittle bit more detailed on what you are writing so that the fans will want to continue reading

Plot: 12/15

interesting but could be better

Originality: 20/20

i think your idea is very creative as this is the first time i hav read this type of story

and seriously , it got me want to continue reading !

keep up the good work ! ^^

Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation/Vocabulary:13 /15

some grammer errors you could work on

and mayb you could add more detailed words?

Detail: 4/5

neatly explained but could add afew more extra

Writing Style: 9/10

neat and tidy and straight forward

its good as sometimes , people tend to sidetrack their own story

Overall Enjoyment: 10/10

PREFECT !

Bonus: 4/5

1. INTERESTING STORY

2. SHINee

3. TAEMIN !

Total: 88.5/100

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