Author: Paige Fiqah
Story Title: Under the Mistletoe
Story URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/UTM
Reviewer: Eunbyul
Site: http://shreddedhearts.blogspot.com/

Title: 5/5
The title was very literal and appropriate for this one-shot. Perfect!

Poster/Background: 4/5
I loved the poster most because of the way the pictures are together. Absolutely amazing!
Absolutely loved them. Stunning! Thought the background was a little plain, but it didn’t make the text bend in too much.

Forewords: 9/10
I thought the forewords was great! I liked the form above the summary.

Plot: 12/15
Your plot is a little cliché. I liked it, but it was too predictable.

Originality: 16/20
Not too original. I’ve read this before and they are all similar endings.

Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation/Vocabulary: 10/15
You had a bunch of grammar mistakes and misused words, but you can easily fix them by proof reading and editing it.

Detail: 3/5
Nothing extravagant about this. I thought this piece could sue a little more work in this department.

Writing Style: 9/10
I defiantly liked your sense of style in this. It was written with some thought as to how you wanted it.

Overall Enjoyment: 9/10
I really enjoyed it! It had the right timing for suspense and it kept me wanting more until the end.

Bonus: 5/5
Total: 82/100

Labels: Eunbyul