Author: ‘Niii
Story Title: Not Enough Love
Story URL: http://winglin.net/fanfic/not_enough/
Reviewer: Starr
Site: http://shreddedhearts.blogspot.com/

Title:5/5
Title was cute, sad, very nice.

Poster/Background:5/5
Blue was the perfect theme color. Poster was really pretty with great effects, and background was subtle and calm.

Forewords: 9/10
The forewards were short & sweet, which is definitely more preferable than a super long one. The guardian angel concept is one that I was instantly lured to, so that’s a strong point. Forewards are hard for me to rate because there are so many ways to present it, such as long ones with little detail, short ones with none, etc. I prefer your type of foreward, but maybe a tiny more detail? :)

Plot: 12/15
I don’t have a ton to say about the plot, because in the forewards, you can already predict how the story will go, which is fine! Just makes the plot more predictable.

Originality: 18/20
The story itself (relationship since little, one gets sick, and passes) wasn’t very original, but the guardian-angel concept was. ;]

Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation/Vocabulary: 15/15
Didn’t find any grammar mistakes xD

Detail: 4/5
There’s not a HUGE amount of detail, but what is there is sweet & really well thought out.

Writing Style: 10/10
Writing is perfect. Totally enjoyable, easy to read & understand, perfect.

Overall Enjoyment:10 /10
Loved the story! Sweet but not corny, sad but not too dramtic. Great :)

Bonus: 2/5
I added 1 extra point for visual characteristics, & 1 point for detail & storyline in the oneshot ^^

Total: 90/100

And I’m really sorry for the super long wait . . .=l

Labels: Starr