Fragments
Author: Maria
Story title: Fragments
Story URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/fragments/
Reviewer: Liz

Title: 5/5
I thought your chosen title was very well fitting to your story.

Poster/Background: 4/5
Oh my, oh my, oh my! I love your poster! It is absolutely gorgeous! I love the colors in it and the strip in the middle just adds to the beauty.
The picture in the background is hardly visible, but the black background and yellow/gold font contrasted very well.

Forewords: 9/10
I admit, the forewords was a bit hard for me to read. It triggered a lot of memories and thoughts, which I find to be a good thing because then I can relate to the story better.
I thought it was very well planned out and written.
I also liked how you add in an acknowledgment (as just a side note).

Plot: 15/15
I though your plot was very well planned out. The rise to the climax was intense but when you finally reached it, BAM! Unexpected events happen. Very interesting.

Originality: 20/20
I can actually say that I thought this story was truly original! Kudos ^^
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation/Vocabulary: 14/15
You have very few grammar mistakes and your spelling is great. But of course they can be improved with some proof reading.

Detail: 5/5
The details in this fic was impressive. You really know how to make people want more.
Writing Style: 10/10
I have to say, your writing is quite formal next to the numerous amount of other stories I have read. Very unique as well.

Overall Enjoyment: 8/10
It was a nice hour read, but I wanted more. More action than thoughts and dialogue.

Bonus: 3/5
Not my cup of tea in character selection but worth the read.

Total: 93/100

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