Author: th1rd3ye
Story Title: Fabric Magic
Story URL: http://www..winglin.net/fanfic/ss_onew_FM
Reviewer: Eunbyul
Site: http://shreddedhearts.blogspot.com/

Title: 4/5
I loved the title used. It was very creative and unique. The story didn’t really revolve around the title too much, but it was mentioned quiet a few times.

Poster/Background: 5/5
Absolutely loved them. Stunning!

Forewords: 8/10
There is too much information and sneak previews in there that I really didn’t want to read the story. You have everything basically out in the open already. And I didn’t see the definition necessary.

Plot: 15/15
I liked your plot a lot. I never read a fanfic about these kind of events. (And the character choice was a plus.)

Originality: 20/20
I thought this was very original.
Not too cliché and the information was very stylish.

Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation/Vocabulary: 13/15
There were quiet a few spelling errors in the first few chapters. But nothing a little revising can’t handle.

Detail: 3/5
There was a lot of details in this story, but not enough in some parts.. Like, the character’s appearances and settings, maybe a little bit of background information on Onew. Where did he come from? Why did he end up there?

Writing Style: 9/10
Your writing style is excellent.

Overall Enjoyment: 9/10
Sad in some parts, but very enjoyable!

Bonus: 5/5

Total: 91/100

Labels: Eunbyul