Author: raindrop_symphony
Story Title: 365 Days
Story URL: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/365dayslovenote/
Reviewer: Darkess

*My reviews are not meant to harm or discourage the author, but to help them fix their stories and do better in the future. The opinions expressed in this review are mine and mine alone, and are not meant to offend you*

Title: 5/5

The title 365 Days fits, but it's super bland. I'm glad you put in the alternative title of Love Notes which is both cute and catchy.

Poster/Background: 3/5

Totally fits the story, and they're both super cute ^^ The only thing, is that right where the second line starts there is something there in the background that makes the beginning couple of words hard to read. A different font could change that a little or even a bit smaller or bigger background.

Forewards: 8/10

Wow. That really drew me in actually. It was short and simple, and It was a definate hook. I would just add maybe one or two interesting quotes from the story ahead to get your readers wanting to know what's happening.

Plot: 13/15

I thought in the beginning , when the guy said that she was like his cousin's friend or something like that, that it was actually the guy she had a crush on. LOL "Chi - Chi? Goku's wife?" I love dragonball Z! XDDD that line totally just made my day :P I thought that you added a lot into this story. Every time one of them left for a few days, I wondered what had happened to them. The plot was intriguing to say the least.

Originality: 20/20

This is the Coolest most unique story I have ever read. How did you ever come up with this? A note for each day. Like they were writing their own love story. This whole story was really amazing. The way that they communicated was creative, and I love how they willingly wrote to each other for almost a year without technically "meeting". They both kept interest in reading the responses of the other. I'm so glad that I was able to read a story like this ^^

Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation/Vocabulary: 13/15

You still hadn’t gotten over it huh? (Day 6)

You still haven't gotten over it huh?

My getting over my problem is none of your problem (Day 7)

My getting over my problem isn't your problem , or , My getting over my problem is none of your business

get you’re message (Day 13)

get your message

You’re crush came (Day 18)

Your

But you’re handwriting is gibberish. (Day 34)

But your handwriting is gibberish.

Ok. You’re handwriting is not gibberish. (Day 36)

Ok, your handwriting is not gibberish.

You’re cousin’s right. (Day 72)

Your cousin is right.

you’re wishful thoughts (Day 74)

your wishful thoughts

If you’re cousin’s here (Day 78)

If your cousin's here

It’s not like their married right? (Day 97)

It's not like they're married, right?

just got to know makes gives you more freedom. (Day 101)

just got to know gives you more freedom.

doing perfectly good in my profession.(day 103)

doing perfectly fine in my profession.

you break up with your girlfriend. (Day 114)

you broke up with your girlfriend.

hope it would work. (Day 115)

hope it will work.

with that sort of things. (day 131)

with that sort of thing.

come here at the library more (Day 132)

come here to the library more

have been telling that she was some social climber. ( day 140)

have been saying that she was some social climber.

a greater place live if (Day 151)

a greater place to live if

mend you’re broken heart. (day 162)

mend your broken heart.

You’re cousin’s name is Yoochun? (Day 222)

Your cousin's name is Yoochun?

you’re cousin Yoochun (Day 269)

your cousin Yoochun

have finished you’re story by then (Day 361)

have finished your story by then

although he still borrow (1 year later)

although he still borrowed

There are not much people (1 year later)

There are not many people

It just means were meant to be.” (1 year later)

It just means we're meant to be."

the light out of Junsu (1 year later)

the lights out of Junsu

Detail: 2/5

There wasn't any detail in this story until the last super long chapter ^^ You described the archives and their little spot well, as well as why Chi-Chi liked that spot. I don't really think that you should add any more detail to this story though. I like it the way it is.

Writing Style: 10/10

I LOVE this style. It's the first time I've ever seen it, and it totally just because my favorite ^^. This whole story was so good. and in the middle of serious thoughts you would put something to make me laugh. A Day in the 80s , Chi- Chi disappeared, and he was like "I'm gonna kick whoever took your notes" something like that. Was so funny! and in the middle of worrying where she went :P The little snippets seemed realistic. I could see someone writing these notes every day.

Overall Enjoyment: 15/10

That's no typo. I can't give it a ten because I liked it much much more than that S2. This story is absolutely amazing. I love the concept, and this story made me really want to try this out and see if it would work.

Bonus: 5/5

Would you mind if I put this story in my blog's hall of fame? You'd only be the second story there ^^ I think you deserve it. http://darkessluvssquirrels.blogspot.com

Total: 94/100

That's a really high score for me to give out. *bows* you should be proud ^^

Labels: Darkess