Author: ShadowYin
Story Title: A Different Side of Love
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Reviewer: Darkess

*My reviews are not meant to harm or discourage the author, but to help them fix their stories and do better in the future. The opinions expressed in this review are mine and mine alone, and are not meant to offend you*

Title: 5/5

This title definately fits the storyline, and it is pretty unique as well.

Poster/Background: 5/5

Absolutely beautiful. The quotes and pictures are very visible as well ^^

Forewards: 10/10

Really good intro to your story/memory. I don't know if it was intentional or not, but you gave tons of like mini teasers... and I know it isn't like... a fictional story, but it was really hooking to me as a reader.

Plot: 15/15

Ending your story with the prayer was a really good idea ^^ The storyline was really thought up well and pieced together in a really powerful and moving way. I thought the message to cherish all that you have really came through fully. It also made me appreciate my family a lot more, and how they aren't abusive. Also, the friend at the end was an awesome thing to put in, especially the boys and girls can be just friends line. I hate when people say you like someone when you have a conversation with a guy. >.<>.<>.<

Total: 94/100

Labels: Darkess